Oh sister dearest, I was about to give you a tongue lashing for repeated messaging a married man who showed no intention of replying, then I read the end🤣 I love your style of writing, it’s so gripping
I suspected it was based on fantasy but your anger and pain definitely came through and, like your other piece on paedophilia, it's a critique that's subtle and direct at times.
There was some nice layering going on and I enjoyed the mixture of long and short sentences and it was kinda like stream of consciousness writing. Your use of misdirection was good as well with that final swerve at the end landing almost like a punchline.
Oh sister dearest, I was about to give you a tongue lashing for repeated messaging a married man who showed no intention of replying, then I read the end🤣 I love your style of writing, it’s so gripping
This was an interesting read ❤️
I suspected it was based on fantasy but your anger and pain definitely came through and, like your other piece on paedophilia, it's a critique that's subtle and direct at times.
There was some nice layering going on and I enjoyed the mixture of long and short sentences and it was kinda like stream of consciousness writing. Your use of misdirection was good as well with that final swerve at the end landing almost like a punchline.
Good job in other words 🙈
Girl 😭😭😭😭😭😭. I thought this was real 😭.